Blemish (Haiku)
it's alright to make
a few mistakes, miss some steps...
learn along the way
♥♥♥
your faults and flaws are
emanations of delight
to him who loves you
♥♥♥
what makes you awesome
are your li'l imperfections...
just be who you are
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
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This is a great series of haiku for the prompt. I love the encouragement of self-acceptance you give in them.
beautiful...the little imperfections are what make life all the more beautiful. love the feel and message of this one...so true. happy sunday!
Yes, it's good to be making some mistakes.. they remind that we are human.. and learning from them makes us super human.. isn't it.. loved your haikus.. do visit my post .. I too have put many a haiku this time..out for OSI also on the same post..
Positively delightful!
Love words like "emanations of delight".....
A very good optimistic approach.... :)
Loved them all...
well said...
Wonderful haikus. Yup as long as you learn the imperfections can stay. And as always one needs to always be their own person. Well done. :)
The third one is the secret why me and my wife have a li'l imperfect happy marriage.
teresa, i'm glad that you like all of them. thanks for the visit.
brian, that's true. we have to accept and embrace our own imperfections.
thanks for appreciating.
ramesh, i'm glad that you appreciate my post. thank you.
Lovely thoughts, lovely haiku!
steveroni, i'm glad to have brightened up your day. thanks for the visit.
sumit thanks for appreciating the post and for visiting.
jingle, thanks ;)
thom, nobody's perfect. we just have to accept ourselves and others the way we/they are. thanks for the visit, my friend.
r.s. mallari, i am so happy for you! that's what we call unconditional love. thanks for the visit.;)
sherry, thank you for appreciating. ;)
Very impressive haiku's!
Beautiful philosophies in your haiku!
It is exactly as if you had written it for me exactly for today :)
Amazing!!!!
Absolutely!...I keep telling my students this "Mistakes are there to be made"...make them and learn from them!
Hi Pink Lady;
True, all your haikus mean a lot...
the few mistakes along the way make us learn;
the flaws and imperfections are a delight to your loved one; and
those li'l imperfections are what make us real...;-)
without blemish we make ourselves lovable to others...:-)
Very nice series here. I wish I could write like this. Love and Light, Sender
Pink Lady,
I enjoyed reading your lovely words.
Love and reality together. We all have some imperfections, but we learn to blend!
Best wishes,
Eileen
Very well said- unfortunately not many recognize this pattern. They believe in what is gone and hold onto it with all their life..!!
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diane, thank you. :)
mary, i'm happy to know that you like the post. thanks.
lu ann, i'm glad that you can relate to these words. thanks for the visit. :)
nalini, i'm sure you are such an inspiration to your students. keep it up. thanks for stopping by. :)
amity, those are lovely verses you wrote. thanks for appreciating my post. :)
sender, you are a great writer yourself and i feel honored that you appreciate my work. thank you so much. :)
eileen, those imperfections are exactly what make us perfect. thanks for stopping by and for appreciating my post.:)
olivia, those are lovely awards that will surely brighten up my page once i post them. thank you so much for your thoughtfulness. :)
Such true words here, Bing. None of us are perfect; that's what makes each of us unique. I loved these Haikus...they send such a good message out to everyone. :) heartspell
heartspell, thank you so much for your heartwarming comment. i really appreciate it every time i see you here. :)
Such positive haikus.
Excellent
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have a fun day!
jingle, i feel so honored to be included in the list. thank you so much to you and the poets who voted for me. :)
Wonderful poem!liked it :)
i'm glad you like it, umapoems. :)
The lil imperfects are what strikes out the difference in every human...this was a soul lifting triple haiku (combined into a poem)
Nicely done.
Cheers!
Oh, such depth and meaning. Your Haiku are wonderful.
Melanie
Lovely thoughts on the theme.
enjoyed your haiku and the picture prompt :O)
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