A Note To My Child
everyday i struggle
to give you the kind of life
that i know you deserve
each pain and and sweat
i hardly notice
after all
after all
they bring me
a step closer
a step closer
to all my dreams for you...
one day soon
i will let you go
and let you roam
the world on your own
and when you do
remember my counsel
choose your battles well
for not all fights
are worth your while...
with all my love,
Mommy
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
W E L C O M E TO
with all my love,
Mommy
W E L C O M E TO
65 POINTS OF VIEW:
Touching and strong words,now i understand how our parents truly feel when we come to this world:D, Thank for sharing such a wonderful poem, I loved it and it really touches my heart deeply! :D
your passion and love are vividly and convincingly said.
beautiful images...
thank you for the thoughtful post.
I linked you in,
riikainfinityy, i never really got along well with my mom and never understood her when i was growing up. everything changed when i finally became a mom myself. now i know that a parent's love for her child is truly unconditional. and everything that she dreamt for me were for my own good. the same feeling i have for my 3 kids now. thanks for appreciating. =)
jingle, i always worry about my kids. this post is written for all 3 of them. thanks for linking me in. happy rally, girl!!! i'm so proud to be part of your community. =)
such a sweet poem. you are indeed the kind of mom every child dream of. thank you for sharing
mory, i love every moment with my teens. and i'm so happy they love my company too. thanks for stopping by. =)
what a loving poem for your child!
Pamela
All we can do is lay the foundation and hope they thrive. I'm sure that you've done just that. You are a very warm, loving person. I've noticed.
Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)
this one's for each of my 3 teenage kids, pamela. they deserve all the love i can give. thanks for appreciating. :D
sandee, that's my prayer... for them to thrive. i guess i have already done my part.. :)
aww so sweet :)
i loved it
thanks harshika ;)
hmmm- yes we nvr truly understand the love of a parent till we become one ourself- great write bing!
What a blessing you are for your child! This is so beautiful and heartfelt and the last four lines such vital advice to any child...now if only they will heed.Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. As a mother, it touches my heart in the deepest way. Heartspell
very touching and compassionate write... beautifully expressed.
Awww.. this was stern, loving, and sweet - all at the same time! Typical mommy words.. and so fondly remembered too :)
We would do anything for our children-- nicely written!
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A true display of a mother's love. Very nice!
My daughter recently turned 18 and is beginning her own journey...Your words touched me. It's comforting to know other parents go through these same feelings. Thanks for sharing.
Tracy H
and that is every parents hope...that they listen along the way and use it once they leave...wonderfully said..straight from the heart...smiles.
Oh, the challenges and rewards of being a mom . . . then, they grow up and your job is to simply be safe harbor, to give that unconditional love . . . but there's nothing like it - being a mom, that is. This is a simply wonderful and tenderly sincere poem. I like it.
Hope the same for my children. Beautiful words.
this is so sweet n touching...ur love just shines thro...n the pic is captivating
You speak pearls of wisdom in your exquisite poem. You are a wonderful parent. Tender, touching, and wise. I truly loved this poem.
Joanny
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A very touching poem that perfectly pictures a mothers love.. beautiful!!
A lovely poem and I like the line about not all fights being worthwhile!
very wise words filled with the beauty of love!
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Is so real to me. It makes me reminisce my past and current situation. Nice words, beautiful!
very nice poem dear, this is a very nice blog xxx
lovely and cute poem
nice poem u have a nice bloggg
Great poem and so true. The hard part is letting go (haven't got there myself yet, been through it with my mom). Thank you for the lovely poem.
fiveloaf, it is parenthood that completes us. :) thanks for stopping by.
heartspell, i'm glad you like it. thanks. =)
raj i'm so glad you like the poem. thanks. :)
kavisionz mothers are stern for a good reason... the loving, sweet part comes out naturally. thanks for appreciating. =)
mairmusic thanks for the nice comment. =)
evangeline, thanks for dropping by. =)
tracy it can be so scary but we just have to trust them... thanks for stopping by. :)
brian we can only do so much as parents. eventually our kids still have to live their own lives. kudos to great parents like you. =)
jamie being a mom is the most fulfilling job in the world. thanks for appreciating my post. :)
anonymous, thanks =)
hoiden i'm glad you like it. thanks. :)
thanks joanny. i have wonderful kids which make it easier for me to be loving and sweet to them. =)
rhythmofmysoul, thanks for the kind words and for stopping by. :)
jessica, thanks for appreciating. ;)
soundoffreedom, thanks. =)
jingle that is great news! thanks so much for the award. i will post soon.:)
waiseekweng, i'm glad you like the post. thanks. =)
william thanks a lot. glad to know you like my blog. =)
reedssss thanks for dropping by. your comments are much appreciated. =)
morganna letting go may be hard but it is inevitable. thanks for the nice comment. :)
wow! very nice poem.i lovely it and cute poem.A very touching poem that perfectly pictures a mothers love.. beautiful!!
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touching poem.
Very powerful
This has touched my heart deeply...like only a mother can!! Such beautiful words creatively said...I love the last line of your poem, so very true. Thanks so much for sharing this :) Much love my friend x
you are so cute,
I am sorry for not being very creative.
Hi!
Having a girl who will one day roam the Earth, this poem resonates deeply with me.
Very lovely! And choosing her battles well is advice that will always serve her well.
Well done!!
-- A Jingle friend.
artswebshow, thank you so much!
amana, i guess all moms are really protective. if only we can always be there with and for them... thanks for stopping by.
jingle, why sorry? you brought us all together in this rally and you write beautiful poems. if that is not creativity, what is? we love you, ji!!!
jannie, thanks for stopping by. we should all learn to choose our battles. that is something we should also teach our kids. ;)
Beautiful!!
no words can describe this very piece...
this is the note to every child fron their mums.
thanks for the kind comment, anky. much appreciated here.
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