Travelling Through Life (Haiku)
As I take a step
Towards the unknown future
I go forth bravely
With you by my side
A reassuring presence...
Nothing scares me now
Together we shall
Tread the path that awaits us-
A whole new journey
Sensational Haiku Wednesday!” is hosted by Jenn at "You know... that Blog?"
Click here for info and background on this weekly event!
The basics:
Haiku is simple! It is 3 non-rhyming lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively (a great way to use your fingers!)
This week’s theme is:TRAVEL
Next week’s theme: Contemplation
This post is also for Thursday Poets Rally
Week 24...
For spreading sunshine through her poem Then, A Cricket Chirred
67 POINTS OF VIEW:
He is, indeed, always a reassuring presence. Wonderful.
Bravely onward! Good ones, Bing :)
Enjoy the journey Bing, as I know you will.
Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)
Beautiful this could be on a greeting card Bing! Have a great HW!
what delightful words.
Yes, you are going to have fun and enjoy a promising future.
So very nice, Bing. Yes, it surely does help to have a mate going with you through the travels of life.
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5th sister, i'm glad you like it. his presence is not only reassuring but comforting as well. =)
jenn, thanks so much. bravely is how we should all move forward. i'm glad you like the haiku collection. thanks for hosting.
sandee, you're my inspiration. thanks. hugs for you, girl.
moorebloglife, thanks. that is flattering. =)
jingle, i am really looking forward to it. not easy... but i'll get there. thanks for your nice words. =)
jim, an inspiration makes it all worth it. thanks for the nice comment. i'm glad you like the poem. =)
Oh my, this brought tears to my eyes. So touching and beautiful! You are a brave lady and I'm so happy you found sunshine again!
It's wonderful to have that special one!! Beautiful poem :)
nice- very nice..
Beautiful haiku! And I agree with the reassuring and comforting presence!
thank you for stopping by.
Your words resonate facing the future with comfort and strength. Enjoyed your poem. thanks
I really enjoyed the last haiku. Very moving.
Bing, this does not come to me as a surprise, I've seen you do great haikus and you are on doing greater ones!
Big thumbs!
Welcome to the rally, here's my post:
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/06/i-promise.html
aawww....that was cute :)
very sweeeet and the pic compliments the poem completely :D
congratulations on the perfect poet Bing :D
here from Jingle's Rally
you can check my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/07/01/thursday-poets-rally-footboard-traveller/
chanda, i'm glad you like the post. it surely is comforting to know that the sun is shining in my life again. :)
buttercup, it is truly wonderful. thanks. :)
fiveloaf, thanks ;)
michelle, thanks for appreciating the post. :)
adam, i'm glad you enjoyed it. thanks for dropping by.
jessica, thanks for appreciating ;)
are you done the 18?
nice to see you in...
I will place another of this link in.
Thanks!
ediomo, thanks for the nice words. i also enjoyed reading your poem. ;)
megzone, i'm glad you like the pic and the poem. isn't it always sweet when words come from the heart... i am so happy to know that you appreciate the post. thanks for dropping by. :)
hi jingle, i'm done with the agreement "sign in" but not with the 18 yet :( i will try to bloghop again tomorrow and finish the 18... and more ;)
what courageous words of encouragement...enjoy your journey thanks for sharing!
Hi Bing.... I really liked your haikus..... the are full of emotion and of hope... :) i also like the graphics you included... ;) congratulations... :)
This is so you. Bravo my dear sweet friend.
the journey is always better when we chose to travel with, not against Him...smiles.
You write the most inspirational haikus!
Lovely haikus. Thank you for sharing.
God is our only constant in life.
You are a blessing...to everyone...bkm
http://signedbkm.blogspot.com
or http://childrensverse.com
Bing
Beautiful Haiku -- and oh so true.
Joanny
A very reassuring Haiku full with confidence and motivation...Nicely said and well put.
thank you for nominating me...
I got 4 this week,
from you, suzi, a poem a day, and raj...
keep up the excellence!
cheers!
Nice blog!
As I go back and read some of your other lovely poetry -- I became a follower of your beautiful blog.
Joanny
Lovely poem - a small, powerful cup of hope. Good luck on your journey. Happy Rally - and wonderful that you suggest Jingle for the Perfect Poet Award. I loved the cricket poem too.
letting you know I am getting your poem to my file so that it appears on Promising Poets Parking Lot…
I will post text only, and with your blog name, general blog link included.
Thank you for the contribution!
:)
This poem makes me feel very peaceful...thank you for sharing.
KelleyGrrl
such a sweet poem :)
very sweet n beautiful poem...ur bravery comes forth in these lines...may u stay so always
http://hoiden.wordpress.com/2010/07/04/journal-entry-101/
So uplifting!
Very inspirational! You're bravery and your determination are exemplified in your words! Blessings to you
Mitch
Really liked it. We all need that special someone to support us no matter how brave we seem to appear. Thanks.
Really liked it. We all need that special someone to support us no matter how brave we seem to appear. Thanks.
beautiful haikus :)
sometimes a reassuring presence is all we need to get through life :)
Wonderful haiku! I can relate to it in so many ways!
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/i-silently-sing-along-idyl.html
thank you for the nomination, i posted my acceptance via the link.
Cheers!
BEST!
I really enjoyed this, in that it is so open to interpretation. Everyone can see themselves in it.
Thank you for sharing. You are such an amazingly inspiring person. God bless!
I sincerely enjoyed your haiku. I think it is the best use of the form I have read in a long time. - Bill
This was very subtle and powerful at the same time. Love it. You have a very unique voice.
Very nicely done thanks for sharing.
Blessings to you too!
Nice haiku, very good for a wedding!
I enjoyed your poem! Wonderful!
I enjoyed your poem! Wonderful!
I loved the Traveling poem.
Nice to think we will never be alone in life. Very sweet
I loved the Traveling poem.
Nice to think we will never be alone in life. Very sweet
empowering and blatant!
empowering and blatant!
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