OF LIVING AND LOVING... AND COPING...: Veiled Core

04 May 2011

Veiled Core

a spectral cover

reality's misty cloak

enigmatic veil

© Bing (PinkLady) 2011

Posted for Sensational Haiku Wednesday : Fog and Haiku Heights #41 : Innocence

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25 POINTS OF VIEW:

Donna May 4, 2011 at 11:16 PM: Often think of fog as blanketing the world. Your use of the word "cloak" seems so much more cozy. And veil, usually used to cover again, but also uncovering at a wedding to celebrate, in my religion. The word choice and the combination, terrific!
Sandee May 5, 2011 at 1:29 AM: And a beautiful veil it is too. What a fabulous shot.

Have a terrific day Bing. Big hug. :)
Anonymous May 5, 2011 at 1:32 AM: Have to say "ditto" to everything Donna said. Ethereal and comforting, your "cloak." Amy
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Anonymous May 5, 2011 at 10:24 AM: "reality's misty cloak" ... I like this imagery, Bing! Nicely penned!!
inquisitive-life May 6, 2011 at 1:55 AM: Bravo..... I so liked it...
Catherine Denton May 6, 2011 at 3:36 AM: Wonderful! Love this!!
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Gloria May 6, 2011 at 7:53 AM: This is true artistry...beautiful!
Bing Yap May 6, 2011 at 7:43 PM: donna,when i saw the prompt, the first thing that came to my mind is the "fog" that surrounds our soul to protect it. don't know where i got that thought. lol! thanks for appreciating. :)
Bing Yap May 6, 2011 at 7:43 PM: sandee, thanks for dropping by again. it's always a pleasure to see you here. thanks for appreciating... as always. :)
Bing Yap May 6, 2011 at 7:44 PM: amy, thanks for the kinds words. i'm glad that you like the post. :)
Bing Yap May 6, 2011 at 7:45 PM: becca, i had a beautiful image in my mind when i wrote this. the pic i chose also helped. thanks for the visit. :)
Bing Yap May 6, 2011 at 7:46 PM: inquisitve life, thanks so much. :)
Bing Yap May 6, 2011 at 7:46 PM: catherine, i'm glad that you like it. thanks. :)
Bing Yap May 6, 2011 at 7:46 PM: gloria, so glad that you like it. thanks. :)
Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? May 7, 2011 at 1:07 AM: Beautifully done, Bing! Very well said :)
M. A. S. May 7, 2011 at 1:17 PM: I'm really starting to like Haiku much more every time I see someone write one that's this good. It's such a talent to be so descriptive in so few words.

Very nice.

Mike
Bing Yap May 8, 2011 at 10:19 AM: jenn, thank you for appreciating my post and for hosting this wonderful meme. :)
Bing Yap May 8, 2011 at 10:20 AM: mike, that is so nice of you to say. haiku is a favorite form of mine. i'm glad that you like it. thanks. :)
Anonymous May 10, 2011 at 2:11 PM: This Reminds me of granny's place. very beautiful haiku :)
tarunima May 11, 2011 at 8:39 PM: this is a beautiful haiku!:)
loved it:)
Poets United May 11, 2011 at 11:51 PM: What an excellent haiku, the word choice is so apt. A couple of well chosen words really makes the imagery jump out.
Bing Yap May 14, 2011 at 4:50 PM: meethimirchi, that's so nice of you to say. thanks for appreciating.
Bing Yap May 14, 2011 at 4:51 PM: tarunima, i'm glad that you like it. thanks.
Bing Yap May 14, 2011 at 4:53 PM: robert (poets united), thanks for the compliment. i really appreciate it.
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