Phoenix Rising... (Haiku)
from ashes she rose
and fluttered towards the sun
swift as light she soared...
________
strength renewed by flames
she spreads her wide fiery wings
a phoenix rises...
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
Posted for Sensational Haiku Wednesday
Next Week's Theme: Direction
Image courtesy: Link
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Beautiful as always Bing. You do these so very well.
Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)
Absolutely wonderful my friend. Our Phoenix is indeed rising and doing a grand job of it. I'm proud of you :)
This is amazing!
Very Beautiful!! So glad I stopped by today to see and read this post!!
Blessings & Big Hug,
Coreen
your Haiku is always fabulous.
You write such wonderful haikus, a form I find so challenging, I have never tried them. It is a gift to say so much in so few lines, a gift you have. Awesome, Bing.
This is very uplifting and encouraging and so beautiful. Thanks for sharing :}. I've been enjoying my trip through the blogosphere lately after recovering from a divorce and have also enjoyed the humor of Grace Adams and her blog, "Looks Great Naked." She's an over-comer who believes in herself and that “victim” is not a good look for anyone.
thanks for the kind words, sandee. :)
Even without the photo your Haiku's are visually stunning I can see every word in my head transform!
thom, that is so nice of you to say. thanks a lot. and a million thanks for your encouraging words... always! i never get tired of them, my friend. hehehe :)
unnamed psalmist, thanks for the appreciation. :)
coreen, i'm happy to know you appreciated my post. thanks for stopping by. :)
that's so nice of you to say, jingle. thanks a lot. :)
sherry, i'm not really good at writing long verses that's why i am comfortable with haiku-writing. your kind words warmed my heart. thanks so much for that. :)
audrey, don't fret about your divorce. that could prove to be a blessing in disguise for all you know. with endings come new beginnings. just enjoy life. thanks for stopping by. i will check out grace adam's blog. :)
amanda, thanks for the compliment. *blush*
You bring us a fire,
Mystic brings water. I need
Air to be grounded.
Cheers!
JzB
Great! Thank you, Bing! Love your blog :}.
jzb, you got all elements covered. :D thanks for stopping by. :)
you're welcome, audrey. :)
Beautiful poem! Love the picture! I was fascinated by the concept of the Phoenix when I was younger!
i do enjoy reading your haikus.
These two are really good
Me thinks this is autobiographical.
Lovely.
Victoria
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ria, thanks for stopping by. i just read your haiku post and those were really lovely words. :)
artswebshow, i'm glad that you like them. thanks for stopping by again. :)
victoria, one of the past comments in this blog mentioned the phoenix. that inspired me to write this piece. thanks for appreciating my post. :)
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a wonderful write... loved the imagery of phoenix rising from ashes. well written
You can certainly identify with this! Well done, and great picture to go with it!
hi jingle, i already submittted my nomination. thanks for notifying me. :)
rajlakshmi, i'm glad that you appreciate my post. thanks for stopping by. :)
jenn, i'm glad that you like it. thanks for hosting and for stopping by. :)
Just the thought itself of a bird rising from its own ashes is so fascinating!!
You Haiku duo did justice to this majestic mythical creature... perfect!
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