The Masquerade
taking things
in stride
what is it
you hide
behind the mask
you wear
what's the secret
you can't bare
your empty
laughter
laughter
gives away
the answer
the answer
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
Posted for Poetry Potluck
14 September 2010
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
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Ahhh but laughter is so good for the soul regardless of what we can't bare :) Very nice my friend :)
that's true thom... as long as one can laugh with all his heart, nothing else matters. thanks for appreciating the poem. ;)
what a cute piece,
the image adds so much credit,
your words match perfectly..
Happy Belated Monday,
No rule,
but if you visit, you get responses....
have fun looking around.
I appreciate your support.
BEST!
xxx
i love how you say so much in so few words. I really enjoyed reading this and the emotions it provoked.
"empty laughter" - it is very revealing.
Really enjoyed this!
Yes, I know this feeling, of laughing to cover the pain that is too intense to reveal. Very well said, Bing. And keep smiling, we love your smile!
Laughter is the key to almost everything. Excellent Bing.
Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)
We oft need the masks to make the day out...Here's my belated Pot Luck poem. Hope your week goes well
your empty laughter...like that..bkm
hi jingle, i'm glad that you like it. i will do my rounds today. i only had enough time yesterday to finish this poem.
congratulations on a job well done at jingle poetry! kudos to you, kavita and amanda for a very successful monday poetry potluck!
caty, i am so happy to know that you enjoyed this piece. thanks for the visit.
talon, thanks for stopping by.
sherry, laughter is a convenient cover. i'm glad that you like it. thanks.
sandee, thanks. i'm glad that you like it.
john, you said it right. thanks for stopping by.
bkm, laughter can be deceiving. thanks for the visit.
behind the mask says it all...at a point the actor will want to get a life...at a point the mask will be unveiled but sad to see people see behind the mask despite all the empty effort to hide. Nicely done!
Cheers.
what beautiful insight, emmanuel! thanks for your lovely comment.
Thank you so much for such an uplifting blog. Your poem "the secret you can't bare...empty laughter gives away" is beautifully written.
Wow Bing, you have done a masterpiece with this one, and perfect for the theme at Potluck!! I am so happy to see your talent shine there. Sorry we are so late with commenting but I was not going to miss you, you know that I love and value your work and support. Well penned my friend and sending you loads of love xxx
brokenpenwriter, i'm glad that you like it. thanks for appreciating.
So many of us live behind the mask... it is a safe haven, rather than challenge the world full speed!
Bing I did not do potluck this week I am just visiting to see what some others did, this is quite lovely.
amanda thanks for your kind words. i really enjoyed doing this and your video prompt at potluck got me so excited. thank you for the visit and for appreciating my contribution.
you, kavita and jingle did a great job! congratulations for a very successful monday poetry potluck! {{{hugsss}}}
We really cannot hide much from certain people.. can we?!?!
Loved this one, pink lady!!
Dark, mysterious and delicious!
So befitting the potluck theme!! Thank you so much.....
kavita, i didn't want to miss the potluck despite an erratic and chaotic schedule here. when i checked out your theme, i got hooked. that was really lovely. thanks and congratulations to you, mandy and jingle for a job well done.
lovely bing..
thanks fiveloaf :)
Hi Bing! Shhhh indeed. I wrote a similar poem. Maybe I'll put it in next week! A very mysterious poem!
Bravo, well done.
Bing this is beautfully written...i love it! :-)
diane, now i'm curious. i would love to read your piece. :)
thanks a lot, mary.
carrie, thanks so much for the appreciation.
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