If God brought you to it,
He will get you through it.

10 February 2011

Longing For You

as dawn breaks i lay
awake... cold and shivering
my soul yearns for you

searing pain grips my
heart... how much longer before
i see you again

 love rush back to me
lest this forlorn existence
shall forever stay 

© Bing (PinkLady) 2011




Posted for !The Haiku Challenge!- Day 10- image 5 

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30 POINTS OF VIEW:

Mike Patrick February 10, 2011 at 11:30 PM  

You see our prompt waiting for her love’s return; a much happier thought than the lost love I envisioned. I like your direction.

Jingle February 10, 2011 at 11:44 PM  

lovely sadness and emotions.
beautiful...
Thanks for stopping by.

Nicole February 10, 2011 at 11:45 PM  

Lovely and quietly moving.

Bing (PinkLady) February 11, 2011 at 12:04 AM  

mike, she's waiting for his return... in the meantime, she lays awake at night with so much anticipation.

thanks for dropping by and appreciating my post. :)

Bing (PinkLady) February 11, 2011 at 12:04 AM  

thanks, jingle. i'm glad that you like my post.

Bing (PinkLady) February 11, 2011 at 12:05 AM  

nicole, thanks for appreciating. :)

Anonymous February 11, 2011 at 1:15 AM  

this is so beautiful bing, so full of yearning, tenderness and longing. just loved it. :)

trisha February 11, 2011 at 1:16 AM  

this is so beautiful bing, so full of yearning, tenderness and longing. just loved it. :)

beccagivens February 11, 2011 at 1:16 AM  

Tender and visceral ... thank you for sharing! becca

Sandee February 11, 2011 at 1:19 AM  

Love is a beautiful thing. Awesome Bing.

Have a terrific day. hug. :)

Sherry Blue Sky February 11, 2011 at 1:57 AM  

So beautiful: "how much loinger before I see you again". Lovely, Bing.

bodhirose February 11, 2011 at 2:18 AM  

The physical and mental aspects of being parted from a loved one is so eloquently displayed by you, Bing. Beautifully done.

P.S. I love Swami Vivekananda and was happily surprised to see a quote here by him.

Gayle ~

subtlescribbler February 11, 2011 at 4:07 AM  

At the end it brings out the positive side of love! pretty well written, love gone but hopes still remain... :)

sarah

Amanda Moore February 11, 2011 at 1:04 PM  

my gosh Bing this is so very romantic I love it!

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 1:56 PM  

thanks trisha... glad that you like it. :)

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 1:57 PM  

becca, thanks for stopping by. :)

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 1:57 PM  

indeed it is, sandee. thanks for dropping by again. happy weekend to you and hubby. :)

Someone is Special February 12, 2011 at 2:05 PM  

Loved your take Bing.. Romantic..

Someone is Special

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 8:15 PM  

sherry, that's also my favorite line. :) thanks for appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 8:18 PM  

bodhirose, thanks for stopping by. swami vivekananda's words are divine... so full of wisdom. we can all learn a lot of positive values from his quotes.

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 8:20 PM  

sarah, love is supposed to teach us hope- even when it ends on a bitter note. i'm glad that you like my post. :)

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 8:20 PM  

thanks so much, amanda. :)

Bing (PinkLady) February 12, 2011 at 8:21 PM  

thanks a lot, SiS! :)

Harshika February 15, 2011 at 5:01 PM  

perfect haiku ;)

Jingle February 19, 2011 at 1:22 AM  

Greetings, how are you?
Your absence is missed, hope you well…
Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

Hope to see you in,

Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

Cheers.
xoxox

Kim Nelson February 25, 2011 at 6:51 AM  

Such intensity of emotion! Haven't heard from you on my site for a while. hope you are well.

Sherry Blue Sky February 25, 2011 at 9:39 AM  

So moving and so filled with longing, Bing. I showed your site to my daughter in law Zenny who comes from the Phillipines. You remind me of each other:) Both so lovely.

Olivia March 10, 2011 at 2:17 AM  

What Love.. what yearn.. what longing.. aah!

**sigh**
Hope you doing good :)

Hugs xx

Jingle March 19, 2011 at 7:18 AM  

checking on you..
best wishes.

Hope to see you around soon.

dreamaire outlast blanket March 21, 2011 at 7:39 PM  

Very good quote for sadness, she is looking very upset and waiting for returns and I hope he will be back in her life my prayers with her, Really its very painful time that you are waiting for someone and there`s no response.
Thank you for sharing with us.

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