A Tranquil Soul
in the stillness of the mind
the soul placidly rests
blissful tranquility wraps
the core of one's being
time falls into oblivion
as the noise slowly dies
and calm soon reigns
solitude's silent song
from deep within
from deep within
sweet lullaby for the soul
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that's blissful read.
enjoy the moment of peace, wonder, and joy here.
trust you on the spot,
have a fulfilling day.
Happy weekend,
Cheers!
it's always my pleasure to join the rally, jingle. i'm excited now to read the other poets' creations. thanks for hosting the rally! :)
Wow Bing wonderful blissful entry..
Lovely thoughts.. Do stop by Someone Is Special..
--Someone Is Special--
Relaxed, serenity is the feeling I get from this poem. Excellent work!
hello SiS, i already did and that was a wonderful post you did there. thanks for nominating me. i really appreciate it. :)
thoughts not lost, i'm glad to know that you found serenity in my post. thanks for appreciating. :)
This brought my Soul so much peace...Beautiful poem.
Cheers!
Wonderful poem, very enchanting. Liked the line of time turning to oblivion.
solitude can be so nourishing-- nicely written!
Very lovely. So peaceful and tranquil. Wonderful, Bing.
Lovely. You could feel the piece radiating in this poem.
-diamondsanddogs
I actually went back and re-read the poem while listening to sounds of the ocean in the background. How soothing. Thank you for this.
emmanuel, peace was its message indeed. thanks for appreciating. :)
mstevensson, don't we all wish sometimes for time to stand still even for a short moment? thanks for the visit here. it is much appreciated. :)
marilynn (mairmusic), solitude can also be rejuvenating to the soul. thanks for your visit. :)
sherry, i'm glad that you like it. thank you so much. :)
diamondsanddogs, thanks. that's nice of you to say. :)
daddywasastreetcorner, you did that? wow that's cool! thanks for appreciating my post. :)
touched deeply. thank you most sincerely.
in e†ernity,
brazillia r. kreep
the kreep
What a beautiful one.. The image is just so complimenting- very well written My Dear Bing!!
It seems so peaceful reading your words here.. very well done- Great Weekend sweetheart.. :D
HUGS...xxx
This is the best
I've seen from you yet.
A keeper, for sure. Absolutely!
God bless your sweet soul,
and have a blissful rest.
In peace, Uncle Tree
the kreep, thank you for stopping by and leaving a nice comment. :)
olivia, in that case, the poem has served its purpose. happy to know you like it. :)
uncle tree, thanks for the sweet comment.:)
That is absolutely beautiful, Bing.
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poets rally participation awards.
enjoy!
hi susan, it's so nice to see you here again. i'm glad that you like the post. i really appreciate your visit. :)
jingle, those are lovely awards! thanks again for your thoughtfulness.:)
The quiet moments are most appreciated during the trying times of life. Wonderful writing!
Darkly:
http://sugaryichigo.wordpress.com/2010/06/25/darkly/
sugaryichigo, that's what we need most during the trying times. i'm glad that you like the post. thanks so much for appreciating. :)
...solitude's silent song
from deep within
sweet lullaby for the soul...
...yes indeed...luv this piece. (^_^)
Bing the last 3 lines of this are truly haunting, I just loved it!
dasuntoucha, thanks for appreciating. i'm glad that you like this piece. :)
amanda, that's every soul's wish... peace from within. thanks for appreciating. :)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/
Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx
A strong sense of peace for me as I read.. :) you are the 10th on my list and well, I have to say, you are the only one so far whom I stumbled across with serenity.. Sort of like giving me a drink to quench my thirst before moving on.. How appropriate and timely your words came.. :) *Hug*
jingle, i feel so honored to be included in your list again. thanks for the lovely awards. :)
those are really nice words, krislin. **blush** i'm glad to know you found the poem refreshing. thanks for stopping by. :)
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