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28 September 2010

Medieval Mist

my knight in shining armor

so soon must you leave
oh king of my heart
from afar i hear
the trumpets pealing
i know you must depart
off to war
into the woods
and beyond
must you join
your valiant army
to face your foes
with mighty roar
where earth shall
turn to red
from a pool of blood
spilt by the slain
i shall but sit here
and await
the joyous trumpet sound
my knight's return
proudly mounted on
his white gallant steed
and crowned
with olive wreath
thence shall i run
to his waiting arms
and ride with him
into the mist of eve

© Bing (PinkLady) 2010

 Posted for Poetry  Potluck and The Poetry Pantry

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Anonymous September 28, 2010 at 2:13 PM  

You are such a romantic. :). Great poem my friend.

Bing Yap September 28, 2010 at 2:34 PM  

thanks thom... seriously, i didn't know how to end this one. :D thank you so much for appreciating.

Uma Anandane September 28, 2010 at 7:47 PM  

very beautifully written her awaiting for her king's return.I loved it

Bing Yap September 28, 2010 at 8:12 PM  

umamaheswari,i'm glad that you like it. thanks for the visit.

Jingle September 28, 2010 at 8:46 PM  

romantic and beautiful poem..
it is worthy waiting in this case.

Jingle September 28, 2010 at 8:47 PM  

Thanks for the support.
Happy Tuesday!
Glad to have you stand with us...
your poetry truly shines.

Anonymous September 28, 2010 at 9:44 PM  

A beautiful piece, Bing, transport me back to the medieval times, great imageries.. I can sense the longing, yet she took it with knowledge that she must be ready for whatever the outcome is.. :)

Anonymous September 28, 2010 at 11:17 PM  

wow! double wow! haha!

Amanda September 29, 2010 at 4:33 AM  

The perfect poem for our Potluck, I felt in the moment and her longing touched my heart! I loved those medieval times too...get lost in the romance of the time!! Thanks so much for writing this for Potluck my dear Bing...you're such an awesome friend and always supports us. That means so much!! Have a great week my dear friend xx

Sherry Blue Sky September 29, 2010 at 4:49 AM  

I have always loved this picture.........is this a poem inspired by the picture, or is it based on real life, I wonder? It is highly romantic. I vaguely remember those feelings, cobwebby though the memories are, ha ha! A lovely romantic poem. Good work!

Anonymous September 29, 2010 at 7:32 AM  

So romantic, riding into the mist at evening! Nicely done!

Thoughts Not Lost September 29, 2010 at 8:09 AM  

Love this! So romantic. Well done!

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 8:19 AM  

jingle, thanks for your continued support as well. i love the monday poetry potluck! =)

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 8:20 AM  

imagina, the anticipation of the next meeting makes the waiting worthwhile. thanks for appreciating my work. that means a lot to me. :)

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 8:21 AM  

fiveloaf, thanks. hehe =)

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 8:23 AM  

mandy, it was my pleasure to join the potluck. you and kavita have done a great job. thanks for appreciating my entry this week. :)

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 8:26 AM  

sherry, the waiting and the longing are for real. the image helped me though in crafting the "medieval part" of the poem. thanks for appreciating it. :)

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 8:28 AM  

marilyn (mairmusic), i've always known that there's a romantic bone in me. i just didn't know how to put them in words. i'm glad it sounded right in the end.:D thanks so much for the visit.

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 8:29 AM  

thoughts not lost, i'm glad that you like it. thanks for the visit. :)

morganna September 29, 2010 at 9:07 AM  

Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

Lu Ann September 29, 2010 at 10:05 AM  

Aw!! it so well describes a beloved man through an in love woman´s eyes! Knight or not he can still seem so gallant and brave and beautiful to us:)

I really, really liked it! You are very tallented. Thanks for sharing!

Seems like I find you here very often ;)

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 12:03 PM  

morganna, thanks for appreciating. :)

Bing Yap September 29, 2010 at 12:05 PM  

lu ann, through a woman's eyes, the man she loves is a hero. thanks for the visit and your nice comment.

Anonymous September 29, 2010 at 6:37 PM  

What a woman! Oh, what a lucky knight
he will be when he makes his return
to the homeland. I'll wish him luck,
and wish you well, dear Bing. Nice one!

Anonymous September 29, 2010 at 7:43 PM  

What a romantic peace, Bing...lovely.

Cheryl September 29, 2010 at 8:46 PM  

Beautifully written and evocative Bing.

Anonymous September 29, 2010 at 11:03 PM  

Bing, you bring romance to such a high level of feeling and wonder. Thank you for letting me experience it through your excellent crafting of words.


Teresa September 30, 2010 at 7:29 AM  

So romantic! I hope it has a happy ending.

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:28 PM  

thanks me2watson. i am truly awaiting for my knight's return. ;)

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:29 PM  

thanks so much for appreciating, penelope :)

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:29 PM  

i'm glad that you like it, cheryl. thanks.

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:29 PM  

that is nice of you to say, tasithoughts. i really appreciate it.

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:30 PM  

i believe in happy endings, teresa. i'm sure there is one in this story. ;) thanks.

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:36 PM  

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The_talon [Moderator] 3 days ago

Such imagery - it reminded me of a fairytale!

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:37 PM  

talon, if only life is a fairytale... thanks for the visit. =)

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:42 PM  

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deadpoet88 [Moderator] 1 day ago

Lovely poem. Brought back tales of medieval times. I love those tales. Amazing fairy-tale.

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:43 PM  

i should give credit to kavita and amanda for such a beautiful prompt. thanks for appreciating, deadpoet. :)

Bing Yap October 3, 2010 at 5:44 PM  

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Shashi [Moderator] 3 hours ago

Beautifully picturised the lovers waiting for her knight in shining armor to return from the fight... very nicely put Bing - The pink lady. I enjoyed it throughly.

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Anonymous November 16, 2010 at 4:53 PM  

What a life those queens and royal ladies must've had!! Always waiting, and fearing for their beloved's lives!!
So well portrayed here, Bing...
Commendable work indeed!!!

JamieDedes November 17, 2010 at 10:14 PM  

Well written and deliciously medieviel.

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