Breathless Beauty
Hold your breath, the world unfolds,
In silver whispers, tales retold.
Pause the rush, feel the weight,
Life’s a song we can’t recreate.
Every moment, pure and bright,
A flicker caught in morning light.
Hush the noise, still the sound,
Beauty blooms all around.
Air is thin, yet life’s so deep,
Secrets linger where we leap.
Every breath a spark, a chance,
To catch the rhythm, join the dance.
So hold it close, then let it fly,
This fragile breath, a soft goodbye.
In each heartbeat, wild and free—
Life’s a gift, a mystery.
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A pocketful of sunshine and
Poetry Prompt:
12 POINTS OF VIEW:
A pleasure to read this beautiful, positive poem.
A lovely gentle piece. Very sorry to hear about your husband.
Your words shine through like a rare diamond among the fold.
Your words are a breath of fresh air. Have to tell myself the world is still lovely. :)
Such a beautiful poem!!! Wise, deep and inspiring. Thank you for gifting us ......
Thank you, Rosemary.
Thank you for your kind words, J Cosmo Newberry.
Thanks for your kind words, Penelope.
Yes, it's truly a wonderful world. Thank you, dsnake1.
Thank you for your kind words, Helen.
PS I love the beautiful haiga too!
Absolutely stunning poem, Bing!
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