A Flicker of Sunlight
longing
yearning
wondering...
if love
so deep
can happen
again...
praying
hoping
waiting...
love's sweet
rendezvous
that's long
overdue...
flickering
dwindling
fading...
beneath
the moon's
dimming span
the stars commiserate
expecting
desiring
aspiring...
perhaps
the break of dawn
will bring her closer
to her sunshine
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
rendezvous
that's long
overdue...
flickering
dwindling
fading...
beneath
the moon's
dimming span
the stars commiserate
expecting
desiring
aspiring...
perhaps
the break of dawn
will bring her closer
to her sunshine
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
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that's very beautiful sentiments...
super talented piece.
Thanks for sharing!
i'm glad you like it jingle :)
As long as there is a flicker of sunlight then there is hope. Excellent Bing.
Have a terrific day honey. Big hug. :)
Beautiful my friend. And I truly believe that there is always hope. The day the sun doesn't shine will be the day hope is gone and even on the cloudy days it shines brightly :) Well done!
beautiful - full of wonder if love so deep can come again...keep that flicker alive....very nice Lady...bkm
by far the best i have read this week! :) love your style..
Such a sweet love song-- I do love how your poem snakes its words in a long train, so you read every one.
I've brought an old favorite to the potluck: http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2009/04/16/week-26-i-looked-into-my-heart-while-my-eyes-were/ Enjoy!
YES IT WILL! And yes, love can happen again. Lovely poem, Bing!
Love this part, really struck me:
"beneath
the moon's
dimming span
the stars commiserate"
Dimming span...stars commiserate. Love, love, love, your way with words. Great job!
This is really beautiful!
Thank you for sharing it.
And thank you for visiting my blog too!
Louise
sandee, i am holding on to that flicker of sunlight. a big {{{hug}}} for you too. :)
thom, i love this quote from eckhart tolle:
"even when the sky is heavily overcast, the sun hasn't disappeared. it's still there on the other side of the clouds."
the sun always shines...
have a good day! =)
bkm, as long as the light within flickers, it will never be dark. thanks for stopping by.
fiveloaf, that is the best compliment i got for my work. thank you so much.
mairmusic, i'm glad that you like my post. i'm headed to your site now. thanks for stopping by.
sherry, thanks for the nice comment. just feeling a little melancholic when i wrote this piece. :)
thoughts not lost, thanks for appreciating my post. your comment warmed my heart. :)
louise, thanks for stopping by and appreciating my post. :)
What an optimistic poem! This is great.
thanks for sharing your cancer story over at my place...a wonderful piece...i hope that sun shines bright...just for you...
teresa, thank you for stopping by.
brian, the sun brightly shines over here. i didn't mean to downplay the pain that cancer brings but my comment at your site sprung from my own experiences of loss- from cancer as against a sudden, tragic death.
thanks for your warm comment here.
Aww very sweet and wonderful.. great one, Bing :)
Napakaganda nang iyong tula at itoy nanatili sa aking isipan ( You have a beautiful poem that remain in my mind)Masaya akong nakilala kita.(I am happy to know you)
Oh...those rays of hope are really very assuring...especially when they come with wings of love!
This was an absolutely piece of longing, dreams and an unfaltering positivity (dim, but it exists nonetheless!)
Thank you linking this sweet and soft poem with poetry potluck, Bing... we are truly honored to have you here!
Wow, this is fantastic
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing.
Bing what a lovely form you sued in the piece, I enjoyed it very much.
Oh wow, this is just lovely... Thank you for posting these touching words :)
A beautiful expression of hope. Very touching and positive.
excellent poem friend, loved the steady flow of the whole piece :)
imagina, thank you. :)
maraming maraming salamat rasec! natutuwa ako at nagustuhan mo ang aking tula.
kavita, the honor is mine. i enjoyed this week's potluck! thanks for the visit.
arts web show, thanks so much.
m pleasure morganna... thanks for stopping by.
amanda, i'm glad that you like it. thank you.
sha moo, i am sooooooooo happy to see you here! thank you so much!
victoria, i always try to end on a positive not. thanks for appreciating.
william, a compliment this good coming from you warms my heart. thank you so much.
Beautiful poem, Bing.
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/4ever-friends-thursday-poets-rally-week-29/
welcome to week 29….
friendship award 4 u.
penelopephoebe, thanks for appreciating it.
hi jingle, i might be able to post my entry tomorrow. thanks for the friendship award. you are so sweet as always.
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