Reflection (Haiku)
in hindsight, all pains
that come our way are meant to
make us grow stronger
what seemed like aimless
journey, now it has revealed
a profound purpose
like a butterfly
breaking out of a cocoon
a new dawn appeared
with new wings to soar
heights that i've never been to
fly higher i will
This week's theme: Reflection
16 POINTS OF VIEW:
Very well said and oh so very true. Some people never get this either.
Have a terrific day Bing. Big hug. :)
who else can better understand than you... sandee, we both know now that happiness is a matter of choice. :) like you, how i wish everyone would see that.
I so needed to read these words today. Thank you for penning them.
It is hard to see the benefit while suffering the pain, but once one is on the other side, the gains are there to compensate. Very nice haiku.
That first haiku is so wonderful I would especially like it to be grammar perfect. If you would please, put an s on pain to make it plural OR change are to is in the second line. ;) (This is not criticism. It is very hard to compose poetry in any language but one's native tongue and you have done an outstanding job.)
Bing did anyone ever tell you that you are a magnificent person and just truly a person that makes one feel good all the time? My friend these are beautiful and so well done. I love them all. You are just brilliant :) Have a wonderful Wednesday :)
Very nice, Bing! Uplifting and moving forward at the same time. We all need to live this way. Without occasional pain we simply wouldn't appreciate the pleasures of life.
5th sister, the pleasure's mine. happy to know the post inspired you. :)
hi quilly, thanks for pointing out the oversight. i made the proper correction already. i'm glad you like the post. :D
thom you always say the nice things. if not for you i wouldn't have found this meme. now i just can't stop. thanks for the encouragement. a big hug for you!
jenn, wisdom comes later after the pain. it is only then when we get to appreciate life itself. thanks for hosting this wonderful meme. :)
it hit right through me!
thanks!
xoxo,
fickle
Reflection
hi fickle, i'm happy to know that. thanks. :)
Seemingly aimless and random journeys take on meaning through the process of reflection. Thanks for the powerful reminder!
Impressionist Reflection
otherwise, we shall lose the lesson, right? well said, magical mystical teacher.
Beautiful poem, and yes we are our own masters. Experiences are what makes us exist and fly higher day by the day to where we are for always shining. :)
Your blog is beautiful.
great and wonderful..
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