If God brought you to it,
He will get you through it.

15 November 2010

Bye For Now


sweet kisses blown

tearful goodbyes thrown

deep tinge of pain

eased by covenant

evanescent time and space

bridged by two hearts as one

reunion is reckoned

forever beckons


© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
 
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55 POINTS OF VIEW:

fiveloaf November 15, 2010 at 3:59 PM  

in your heart and in your thoughts, you are always jointed. so, no longer do you need to beckon.. great write my friend!

Bing (PinkLady) November 15, 2010 at 6:18 PM  

well said, fiveloaf. :) thanks for the visit.

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) November 15, 2010 at 9:17 PM  

The photo is beautiful, and I suppose it is like your poem, what you see without you see within.

Bing (PinkLady) November 15, 2010 at 9:53 PM  

that's nice of you to say, amias. thanks for appreciating. :)

ladynimue November 15, 2010 at 9:58 PM  

Beautiful :) simple and sweet post tinged with pain!

Bing (PinkLady) November 15, 2010 at 10:13 PM  

lady nimue, fleeting pain that will soon be soothed by sweet reunion. i'm glad that you like the post. thank you. :)

Mary November 15, 2010 at 10:48 PM  

Very nice. Also liked the picture you chose to go with it.

Mary November 15, 2010 at 10:49 PM  

Very nice poem, and I really like the picture you chose to go with it.

Sandee November 15, 2010 at 11:09 PM  

You write poetry so well Bing. I real flair for poetry.

Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)

dan roberson November 15, 2010 at 11:38 PM  

When there is hope, pain can be eased. There will be reunion. Very nice.

Jingle November 15, 2010 at 11:41 PM  

love the perfect rhymes,
a sad departure, yet with hope and love behind...

Thanks for sharing your poetry with potluck.
Happy monday.

flaubert November 16, 2010 at 1:09 AM  

pinklady,
Beautiful sentiments.
Pamela

Olivia November 16, 2010 at 1:30 AM  

Dear Bing,

very beautiful words just as how you are.. :)
A little sad but an undying hope towards the end..

I read that at the side widget area.. I am sorry for your Loss!!

Hugs as always
xoxoxox

Sherry Blue Sky November 16, 2010 at 1:40 AM  

Beautiful, Bing.

abthomas November 16, 2010 at 1:44 AM  

A beautiful yet sorrow filled write, I enjoyed the read, thank you!

industrialarts November 16, 2010 at 2:55 AM  

nice piece. reflective and heart felt. nice rhyming. good job!

Eric Alder November 16, 2010 at 4:35 AM  

The short lines help to emphasize each sentiment simply and clearly.

Nice piece, Bing!


P.S. - Pink Lady is one of my favorite kinds of apple. :)

Thoughts Not Lost November 16, 2010 at 5:03 AM  

So pretty!! I loved it!

Rosidah Abidin November 16, 2010 at 6:50 AM  

Beautiful words. I love the hope reflected in it.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:10 AM  

mary, i'm glad that you like it. thanks for appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:11 AM  

sandee, i'm getting the hang of it and really enjoying it. simple, concise words define my state of being. i'm glad that you like it. ;)

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:12 AM  

dan, the reunion makes the separation worthwhile. thanks for stopping by.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:14 AM  

jingle, life is not all sadness. there is always hope of reunion for each parting. thanks for appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:14 AM  

pamela, thanks for appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:17 AM  

hi olivia, it's so nice to see you here again. in time, we all get over any loss in our lives. it's up to us to take the steps to move on. that's what i did. thanks for stopping by.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:17 AM  

sherry, thanks for appreciating... as always. ;)

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:18 AM  

abthomas, i'm glad that you appreciate it. thank you.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:19 AM  

industrial arts, thanks for stopping by and for appreciating my post.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:20 AM  

eric, i'm sure those are really sweet apples. :D thanks for appreciating my post.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:20 AM  

thoughts not lost, thanks for appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 7:21 AM  

rosidah, hope is the essence of our existence. i'm glad that you liked my post. thanks for dropping by again.

beginningpoetry November 16, 2010 at 9:11 AM  

Very nice. Very thoughtful. - bill

Lyn November 16, 2010 at 9:26 AM  

So lovely and deeply touching..thank you for this beautiful poem!

Teresa November 16, 2010 at 10:12 AM  

This is so beautiful and touching.

Dasuntoucha November 16, 2010 at 10:33 AM  

Lovely piece.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 12:52 PM  

bill, thanks for appreciating and for dropping by.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 12:52 PM  

lyn, i'm glad that you like it. thank you.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 12:53 PM  

teresa, thanks so much.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 12:53 PM  

dasuntoucha, thanks for stopping by.

The Reason You Come November 16, 2010 at 1:45 PM  

BIttersweet and hopeful! Lovely piece!

Shashi November 16, 2010 at 3:02 PM  

Dear Pink Lady

Very nice journey... from pain to happiness... I liked it very much...

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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kavisionz November 16, 2010 at 4:36 PM  

Away/near - these may be mere words... but their meanings reside deep within... and your poem totally reinforced that thought in me! I am glad it did! Cuz when you "know", you can attempt to "control" too...

Thanks for this beautiful poem, Bing..

jessicasjapes November 16, 2010 at 5:06 PM  

Love the sense of eternal love here. Beautifully crafted.

Eaton Bennett November 16, 2010 at 7:20 PM  

A beautiful piece of poetry. You have a wonderful attitude to your sad loss. God bless. :))

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 8:02 PM  

the reason you come, thanks for appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 8:03 PM  

shashi, thanks for stopping by and appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 8:05 PM  

you said it right, kavita. thank you. :)

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 8:05 PM  

jessica, i'm glad that you like the poem. thanks for stopping by.

Bing (PinkLady) November 16, 2010 at 8:07 PM  

eaton, i remain hopeful because the separation is only temporary. thanks for appreciating. :)

Lu Ann November 17, 2010 at 6:43 AM  

Being apart... even for a minute can feel like a thousand years away... but when hope is there, then nothing can ever make your faith fall down.

Amazing poem, thanks a lot for sharing, I know them all have a very precious piece from your heart... I guess that´s why they are all so touching.

TALON November 17, 2010 at 12:10 PM  

The last two lines just resonate...the promise of meeting again and never being separated.

Just lovely!

Bing (PinkLady) November 17, 2010 at 6:14 PM  

well said, lu ann. we hold on to hope in the midst of pain. thank you so much for appreciating my piece. :)

Bing (PinkLady) November 17, 2010 at 6:17 PM  

talon, that is every heart's desire- for love to stay forever. if only...

thanks for dropping by and appreciating my post. :)

JamieDedes November 17, 2010 at 10:08 PM  

A well-written poem of enduring love. If only we could have our loves forever more.

Wonderful.

Happy Potluck...

words4afriend November 21, 2010 at 12:44 AM  

Very nice words accompanied by lovely pictures. Your blog is a wonderful tribute a loved one.

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