Bye For Now
sweet kisses blown
tearful goodbyes thrown
deep tinge of pain
eased by covenant
evanescent time and space
bridged by two hearts as one
reunion is reckoned
forever beckons
© Bing (PinkLady) 2010
Posted for The Poetry Pantry
and Poetry Potluck
Image credit: Link
55 POINTS OF VIEW:
in your heart and in your thoughts, you are always jointed. so, no longer do you need to beckon.. great write my friend!
well said, fiveloaf. :) thanks for the visit.
The photo is beautiful, and I suppose it is like your poem, what you see without you see within.
that's nice of you to say, amias. thanks for appreciating. :)
Beautiful :) simple and sweet post tinged with pain!
lady nimue, fleeting pain that will soon be soothed by sweet reunion. i'm glad that you like the post. thank you. :)
Very nice. Also liked the picture you chose to go with it.
Very nice poem, and I really like the picture you chose to go with it.
You write poetry so well Bing. I real flair for poetry.
Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)
When there is hope, pain can be eased. There will be reunion. Very nice.
love the perfect rhymes,
a sad departure, yet with hope and love behind...
Thanks for sharing your poetry with potluck.
Happy monday.
pinklady,
Beautiful sentiments.
Pamela
Dear Bing,
very beautiful words just as how you are.. :)
A little sad but an undying hope towards the end..
I read that at the side widget area.. I am sorry for your Loss!!
Hugs as always
xoxoxox
Beautiful, Bing.
A beautiful yet sorrow filled write, I enjoyed the read, thank you!
nice piece. reflective and heart felt. nice rhyming. good job!
The short lines help to emphasize each sentiment simply and clearly.
Nice piece, Bing!
P.S. - Pink Lady is one of my favorite kinds of apple. :)
So pretty!! I loved it!
Beautiful words. I love the hope reflected in it.
mary, i'm glad that you like it. thanks for appreciating.
sandee, i'm getting the hang of it and really enjoying it. simple, concise words define my state of being. i'm glad that you like it. ;)
dan, the reunion makes the separation worthwhile. thanks for stopping by.
jingle, life is not all sadness. there is always hope of reunion for each parting. thanks for appreciating.
pamela, thanks for appreciating.
hi olivia, it's so nice to see you here again. in time, we all get over any loss in our lives. it's up to us to take the steps to move on. that's what i did. thanks for stopping by.
sherry, thanks for appreciating... as always. ;)
abthomas, i'm glad that you appreciate it. thank you.
industrial arts, thanks for stopping by and for appreciating my post.
eric, i'm sure those are really sweet apples. :D thanks for appreciating my post.
thoughts not lost, thanks for appreciating.
rosidah, hope is the essence of our existence. i'm glad that you liked my post. thanks for dropping by again.
Very nice. Very thoughtful. - bill
So lovely and deeply touching..thank you for this beautiful poem!
This is so beautiful and touching.
Lovely piece.
bill, thanks for appreciating and for dropping by.
lyn, i'm glad that you like it. thank you.
teresa, thanks so much.
dasuntoucha, thanks for stopping by.
BIttersweet and hopeful! Lovely piece!
Dear Pink Lady
Very nice journey... from pain to happiness... I liked it very much...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Away/near - these may be mere words... but their meanings reside deep within... and your poem totally reinforced that thought in me! I am glad it did! Cuz when you "know", you can attempt to "control" too...
Thanks for this beautiful poem, Bing..
Love the sense of eternal love here. Beautifully crafted.
A beautiful piece of poetry. You have a wonderful attitude to your sad loss. God bless. :))
the reason you come, thanks for appreciating.
shashi, thanks for stopping by and appreciating.
you said it right, kavita. thank you. :)
jessica, i'm glad that you like the poem. thanks for stopping by.
eaton, i remain hopeful because the separation is only temporary. thanks for appreciating. :)
Being apart... even for a minute can feel like a thousand years away... but when hope is there, then nothing can ever make your faith fall down.
Amazing poem, thanks a lot for sharing, I know them all have a very precious piece from your heart... I guess that´s why they are all so touching.
The last two lines just resonate...the promise of meeting again and never being separated.
Just lovely!
well said, lu ann. we hold on to hope in the midst of pain. thank you so much for appreciating my piece. :)
talon, that is every heart's desire- for love to stay forever. if only...
thanks for dropping by and appreciating my post. :)
A well-written poem of enduring love. If only we could have our loves forever more.
Wonderful.
Happy Potluck...
Very nice words accompanied by lovely pictures. Your blog is a wonderful tribute a loved one.
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