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20 September 2010

A Flicker of Sunlight


longing
yearning
wondering...

if love
so deep
can happen
again...

praying
hoping
waiting...

love's sweet
rendezvous
that's long
overdue...

flickering
dwindling
fading...

beneath
the moon's
dimming span
the stars commiserate

expecting
desiring
aspiring...

perhaps
the break of dawn
will bring her closer
to her sunshine


© Bing (PinkLady) 2010


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44 POINTS OF VIEW:

Jingle September 20, 2010 at 10:03 PM  

that's very beautiful sentiments...

super talented piece.
Thanks for sharing!

Bing (PinkLady) September 20, 2010 at 10:38 PM  

i'm glad you like it jingle :)

Sandee September 20, 2010 at 11:34 PM  

As long as there is a flicker of sunlight then there is hope. Excellent Bing.

Have a terrific day honey. Big hug. :)

Thom September 21, 2010 at 12:58 AM  

Beautiful my friend. And I truly believe that there is always hope. The day the sun doesn't shine will be the day hope is gone and even on the cloudy days it shines brightly :) Well done!

signed...bkm September 21, 2010 at 1:50 AM  

beautiful - full of wonder if love so deep can come again...keep that flicker alive....very nice Lady...bkm

fiveloaf September 21, 2010 at 2:30 AM  

by far the best i have read this week! :) love your style..

mairmusic September 21, 2010 at 3:54 AM  

Such a sweet love song-- I do love how your poem snakes its words in a long train, so you read every one.

I've brought an old favorite to the potluck: http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2009/04/16/week-26-i-looked-into-my-heart-while-my-eyes-were/ Enjoy!

Sherry Blue Sky September 21, 2010 at 6:35 AM  

YES IT WILL! And yes, love can happen again. Lovely poem, Bing!

Thoughts Not Lost September 21, 2010 at 7:55 AM  

Love this part, really struck me:

"beneath
the moon's
dimming span
the stars commiserate"

Dimming span...stars commiserate. Love, love, love, your way with words. Great job!

M.L. Gallagher September 21, 2010 at 8:37 AM  

This is really beautiful!

Thank you for sharing it.

And thank you for visiting my blog too!

Louise

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:26 AM  

sandee, i am holding on to that flicker of sunlight. a big {{{hug}}} for you too. :)

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:29 AM  

thom, i love this quote from eckhart tolle:

"even when the sky is heavily overcast, the sun hasn't disappeared. it's still there on the other side of the clouds."

the sun always shines...

have a good day! =)

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:30 AM  

bkm, as long as the light within flickers, it will never be dark. thanks for stopping by.

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:31 AM  

fiveloaf, that is the best compliment i got for my work. thank you so much.

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:31 AM  

mairmusic, i'm glad that you like my post. i'm headed to your site now. thanks for stopping by.

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:46 AM  

sherry, thanks for the nice comment. just feeling a little melancholic when i wrote this piece. :)

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:47 AM  

thoughts not lost, thanks for appreciating my post. your comment warmed my heart. :)

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 9:47 AM  

louise, thanks for stopping by and appreciating my post. :)

Teresa September 21, 2010 at 10:47 AM  

What an optimistic poem! This is great.

Brian Miller September 21, 2010 at 10:54 AM  

thanks for sharing your cancer story over at my place...a wonderful piece...i hope that sun shines bright...just for you...

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 12:38 PM  

teresa, thank you for stopping by.

Bing (PinkLady) September 21, 2010 at 12:40 PM  

brian, the sun brightly shines over here. i didn't mean to downplay the pain that cancer brings but my comment at your site sprung from my own experiences of loss- from cancer as against a sudden, tragic death.

thanks for your warm comment here.

imagina1 September 21, 2010 at 2:03 PM  

Aww very sweet and wonderful.. great one, Bing :)

rasec September 21, 2010 at 3:12 PM  

Napakaganda nang iyong tula at itoy nanatili sa aking isipan ( You have a beautiful poem that remain in my mind)Masaya akong nakilala kita.(I am happy to know you)

Kavita September 21, 2010 at 3:27 PM  

Oh...those rays of hope are really very assuring...especially when they come with wings of love!

This was an absolutely piece of longing, dreams and an unfaltering positivity (dim, but it exists nonetheless!)

Thank you linking this sweet and soft poem with poetry potluck, Bing... we are truly honored to have you here!

Arts Web Show September 21, 2010 at 6:59 PM  

Wow, this is fantastic

morganna September 21, 2010 at 10:08 PM  

Lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

Bloggin'withAmanda September 21, 2010 at 11:41 PM  

Bing what a lovely form you sued in the piece, I enjoyed it very much.

ShaMoo September 22, 2010 at 12:08 AM  

Oh wow, this is just lovely... Thank you for posting these touching words :)

Victoria September 22, 2010 at 12:21 AM  

A beautiful expression of hope. Very touching and positive.

william September 22, 2010 at 4:05 AM  

excellent poem friend, loved the steady flow of the whole piece :)

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 6:53 AM  

imagina, thank you. :)

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 4:53 PM  

maraming maraming salamat rasec! natutuwa ako at nagustuhan mo ang aking tula.

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 4:54 PM  

kavita, the honor is mine. i enjoyed this week's potluck! thanks for the visit.

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 4:55 PM  

arts web show, thanks so much.

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 4:55 PM  

m pleasure morganna... thanks for stopping by.

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 4:57 PM  

amanda, i'm glad that you like it. thank you.

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 4:58 PM  

sha moo, i am sooooooooo happy to see you here! thank you so much!

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 4:58 PM  

victoria, i always try to end on a positive not. thanks for appreciating.

Bing (PinkLady) September 22, 2010 at 5:00 PM  

william, a compliment this good coming from you warms my heart. thank you so much.

penelopephoebe September 22, 2010 at 10:14 PM  

Beautiful poem, Bing.

Jingle September 23, 2010 at 6:58 AM  

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/4ever-friends-thursday-poets-rally-week-29/

welcome to week 29….
friendship award 4 u.

Bing (PinkLady) September 23, 2010 at 8:45 AM  

penelopephoebe, thanks for appreciating it.

Bing (PinkLady) September 23, 2010 at 8:24 PM  

hi jingle, i might be able to post my entry tomorrow. thanks for the friendship award. you are so sweet as always.

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