Hold your breath, the world unfolds,
In silver whispers, tales retold.
Pause the rush, feel the weight,
Life’s a song we can’t recreate.
Every moment, pure and bright,
A flicker caught in morning light.
Hush the noise, still the sound,
Beauty blooms all around.
Air is thin, yet life’s so deep,
Secrets linger where we leap.
Every breath a spark, a chance,
To catch the rhythm, join the dance.
So hold it close, then let it fly,
This fragile breath, a soft goodbye.
In each heartbeat, wild and free—
Life’s a gift, a mystery.
A pleasure to read this beautiful, positive poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rosemary.
DeletePS I love the beautiful haiga too!
DeleteA lovely gentle piece. Very sorry to hear about your husband.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words, J Cosmo Newberry.
DeleteYour words shine through like a rare diamond among the fold.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words, Penelope.
DeleteYour words are a breath of fresh air. Have to tell myself the world is still lovely. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, it's truly a wonderful world. Thank you, dsnake1.
DeleteSuch a beautiful poem!!! Wise, deep and inspiring. Thank you for gifting us ......
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words, Helen.
DeleteAbsolutely stunning poem, Bing!
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