Often think of fog as blanketing the world. Your use of the word "cloak" seems so much more cozy. And veil, usually used to cover again, but also uncovering at a wedding to celebrate, in my religion. The word choice and the combination, terrific!
donna,when i saw the prompt, the first thing that came to my mind is the "fog" that surrounds our soul to protect it. don't know where i got that thought. lol! thanks for appreciating. :)
I'm really starting to like Haiku much more every time I see someone write one that's this good. It's such a talent to be so descriptive in so few words.
"Never are we nearer the Light than when the darkness is deepest."-Swami Vivekananda-
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Often think of fog as blanketing the world. Your use of the word "cloak" seems so much more cozy. And veil, usually used to cover again, but also uncovering at a wedding to celebrate, in my religion. The word choice and the combination, terrific!
ReplyDeleteAnd a beautiful veil it is too. What a fabulous shot.
ReplyDeleteHave a terrific day Bing. Big hug. :)
Have to say "ditto" to everything Donna said. Ethereal and comforting, your "cloak." Amy
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"reality's misty cloak" ... I like this imagery, Bing! Nicely penned!!
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ReplyDeletedonna,when i saw the prompt, the first thing that came to my mind is the "fog" that surrounds our soul to protect it. don't know where i got that thought. lol! thanks for appreciating. :)
ReplyDeletesandee, thanks for dropping by again. it's always a pleasure to see you here. thanks for appreciating... as always. :)
ReplyDeleteamy, thanks for the kinds words. i'm glad that you like the post. :)
ReplyDeletebecca, i had a beautiful image in my mind when i wrote this. the pic i chose also helped. thanks for the visit. :)
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully done, Bing! Very well said :)
ReplyDeleteI'm really starting to like Haiku much more every time I see someone write one that's this good. It's such a talent to be so descriptive in so few words.
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ReplyDeletemike, that is so nice of you to say. haiku is a favorite form of mine. i'm glad that you like it. thanks. :)
ReplyDeleteThis Reminds me of granny's place. very beautiful haiku :)
ReplyDeletethis is a beautiful haiku!:)
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What an excellent haiku, the word choice is so apt. A couple of well chosen words really makes the imagery jump out.
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