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10 February 2011

Longing For You

as dawn breaks i lay
awake... cold and shivering
my soul yearns for you

searing pain grips my
heart... how much longer before
i see you again

 love rush back to me
lest this forlorn existence
shall forever stay 

© Bing (PinkLady) 2011




Posted for !The Haiku Challenge!- Day 10- image 5 

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30 comments:

  1. Mike PatrickFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:30 PM

    You see our prompt waiting for her love’s return; a much happier thought than the lost love I envisioned. I like your direction.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:44 PM

    lovely sadness and emotions.
    beautiful...
    Thanks for stopping by.

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  3. NicoleFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:45 PM

    Lovely and quietly moving.

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  4. Bing YapFebruary 11, 2011 at 12:04 AM

    mike, she's waiting for his return... in the meantime, she lays awake at night with so much anticipation.

    thanks for dropping by and appreciating my post. :)

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  5. Bing YapFebruary 11, 2011 at 12:04 AM

    thanks, jingle. i'm glad that you like my post.

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  6. Bing YapFebruary 11, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    nicole, thanks for appreciating. :)

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    this is so beautiful bing, so full of yearning, tenderness and longing. just loved it. :)

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  8. trishaFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    this is so beautiful bing, so full of yearning, tenderness and longing. just loved it. :)

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    Tender and visceral ... thank you for sharing! becca

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  10. SandeeFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    Love is a beautiful thing. Awesome Bing.

    Have a terrific day. hug. :)

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:57 AM

    So beautiful: "how much loinger before I see you again". Lovely, Bing.

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    The physical and mental aspects of being parted from a loved one is so eloquently displayed by you, Bing. Beautifully done.

    P.S. I love Swami Vivekananda and was happily surprised to see a quote here by him.

    Gayle ~

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  13. Sarah malikFebruary 11, 2011 at 4:07 AM

    At the end it brings out the positive side of love! pretty well written, love gone but hopes still remain... :)

    sarah

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  14. Amanda MooreFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    my gosh Bing this is so very romantic I love it!

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  15. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    thanks trisha... glad that you like it. :)

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  16. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    becca, thanks for stopping by. :)

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  17. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    indeed it is, sandee. thanks for dropping by again. happy weekend to you and hubby. :)

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  18. Someone is SpecialFebruary 12, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    Loved your take Bing.. Romantic..

    Someone is Special

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  19. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    sherry, that's also my favorite line. :) thanks for appreciating.

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  20. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 8:18 PM

    bodhirose, thanks for stopping by. swami vivekananda's words are divine... so full of wisdom. we can all learn a lot of positive values from his quotes.

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  21. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 8:20 PM

    sarah, love is supposed to teach us hope- even when it ends on a bitter note. i'm glad that you like my post. :)

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  22. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 8:20 PM

    thanks so much, amanda. :)

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  23. Bing YapFebruary 12, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    thanks a lot, SiS! :)

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  24. HarshikaFebruary 15, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    perfect haiku ;)

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  25. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:22 AM

    Greetings, how are you?
    Your absence is missed, hope you well…
    Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

    Hope to see you in,

    Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

    Cheers.
    xoxox

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  26. UnknownFebruary 25, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    Such intensity of emotion! Haven't heard from you on my site for a while. hope you are well.

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  27. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 25, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    So moving and so filled with longing, Bing. I showed your site to my daughter in law Zenny who comes from the Phillipines. You remind me of each other:) Both so lovely.

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  28. OliviaMarch 10, 2011 at 2:17 AM

    What Love.. what yearn.. what longing.. aah!

    **sigh**
    Hope you doing good :)

    Hugs xx

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  29. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 19, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    checking on you..
    best wishes.

    Hope to see you around soon.

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  30. dreamaire outlast blanketMarch 21, 2011 at 7:39 PM

    Very good quote for sadness, she is looking very upset and waiting for returns and I hope he will be back in her life my prayers with her, Really its very painful time that you are waiting for someone and there`s no response.
    Thank you for sharing with us.

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