A PROMISE...
when the sun
stops shining
and the moon
ceases to cast its light...
when the stars
will no longer
brighten up
the skies...
and the mountains
will be stripped
of flowers and trees
and of springs and valleys...
when the eternity
we both promised
to each other
will start to falter...
you'll surely see
my love will
always remain
forever true...
~I wrote this poem on March 20, 1989. Oh, to be young and in love! When I read my old poetry journal again, I cringed at all those juvenile creations. I didn't know I was such an "emo" back then. LOL!~
THANK YOU, JINGLE, FOR THE POETRY AWARDS
The Most Popular Poet Award
Let me take this opportunity to thank Jingle for these poetry awards for Poets Rally Week 14. I am truly overwhelmed and humbled by your generous appreciation of my work.
Congrats on the awards and boy you were as creative all those years ago as you are now. That was a wonderful poem :) Have a great weekend :)
ReplyDeleteTHOM thank you and congrats for the same awards. :) you truly deserve them.
ReplyDeletehappy sunday!
wow, cool poem!
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Happy Sunday!
Jingle, i saw the new awards. thank you so much. i already posted them all in my awards gallery page here.
ReplyDeleteGod bless!
Love the poem Bing. I've got a marriage that falls into this poem nicely.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the well deserved awards too.
Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)
SANDEE i know that your hubby is your bestfriend. you are so blessed. stay happy. :) God bless you two!
ReplyDeleteThose were the age of frankness and spontaneous. Words just came out naturally and straight from the heart. I had made attempt to express myself through poems too.
ReplyDeleteBK he is gone forever but the words live... they are just words now.
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